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November 24, 2012
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"Don't leave." Her hand grasps at my collar. Her eyes are wide, panicked.

"Visiting hours are over. I have to." I softly wrap my hand around her's and pull it off of my wrist. At first, she refuses to let go, but after a few seconds, something in her eyes shatters like broken glass and her hand goes limp.

"Okay," she says softly, like a petulant child. Her soft grey eyes are focused on the floor. "Sorry."

"Hey," I say, one hand on her shoulder and the other under her chin. "I love you. I'll be back soon."

As if she doesn't really expect an answer, she whispers, "..Promise?"

"Promise." I nod, pressing my lips briefly to her forehead.

I try to ignore her soft gasp of "Don't leave!" as I exit.

Because if I have to explain again, I'll be sure to stay.
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nataliemelo Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really good! Congrats >< I really liked it.. Poor girl ):
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hgfdsasdfgh Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!! :wow: A lot of people seem to like this one. ><
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hgfdsasdfgh Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks so much!! :squee: It means a lot.
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CPT-CUPCAKE-art Nov 25, 2012   Traditional Artist
good job!
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hgfdsasdfgh Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!! :aww:
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genericusername11 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww! :cry: This is so sad and sweet at the same time! Great work, I really like it~!
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hgfdsasdfgh Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!! :squee: I didn't intend for this to be so sad... XD
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genericusername11 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! ^^ It's really sweet at the same time, though~
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